Major
Argument
1 Thing Done Well
1 Constructive Criticism
1 Thing Done Well
1 Constructive Criticism
Alex
Saari
MA: There is an immense amount of detail that goes into tattoos. And yours appear to have meaning.
Strength: Great job with editing the tattoos!
Improve: Is there any way with the program that you are using to smooth out the transition of the tattoos disappearing/appearing?
MA: There is an immense amount of detail that goes into tattoos. And yours appear to have meaning.
Strength: Great job with editing the tattoos!
Improve: Is there any way with the program that you are using to smooth out the transition of the tattoos disappearing/appearing?
Chris
Cena
MA: What is control? Are humans always in control of our surroundings?
Strength: Great job showing video clips that go along with what you are describing. Also the music is sort of depressing, but it goes along great with the idea of your video.
Improve: Maybe create a more memorable conclusion. The video sort of just ended.
MA: What is control? Are humans always in control of our surroundings?
Strength: Great job showing video clips that go along with what you are describing. Also the music is sort of depressing, but it goes along great with the idea of your video.
Improve: Maybe create a more memorable conclusion. The video sort of just ended.
Craig
Suydam
MA: Montages can help accomplish goals.
Strength: I loved it. I liked that you chose to make a comedic video. It was really funny.
Improve: Fix the glitch that occurs on the high def. format. If you can.
MA: Montages can help accomplish goals.
Strength: I loved it. I liked that you chose to make a comedic video. It was really funny.
Improve: Fix the glitch that occurs on the high def. format. If you can.
Steven
MA: The world is full of nothing. If you go looking for something you will never find it.
Strength: Your editing was superb. I can tell that you make videos often. The quality was fantastic.
Improve: Increase the volume of your voice when talking. It was hard to hear you speak
MA: The world is full of nothing. If you go looking for something you will never find it.
Strength: Your editing was superb. I can tell that you make videos often. The quality was fantastic.
Improve: Increase the volume of your voice when talking. It was hard to hear you speak
Ronnie
MA: People have different sides and personalities. They see themselves one way, but they are different from what they see.
Strength: Great job showing the dynamics of personalities.
Improve: Cut down on the swearing.
MA: People have different sides and personalities. They see themselves one way, but they are different from what they see.
Strength: Great job showing the dynamics of personalities.
Improve: Cut down on the swearing.
Greg
MA: Inform viewers of the site on recent copyright laws and actions.
Strength: Great job at describing SOPA and the other pages. I was confused on some of the information before hand and now it makes more sense.
Improve: This is just an aesthetic suggestion. Could you make it so that the top circles which lead to the different pages move when a person hovers over them instead of on their own? It’s sort of distracting while reading a page when the top is switching.
MA: Inform viewers of the site on recent copyright laws and actions.
Strength: Great job at describing SOPA and the other pages. I was confused on some of the information before hand and now it makes more sense.
Improve: This is just an aesthetic suggestion. Could you make it so that the top circles which lead to the different pages move when a person hovers over them instead of on their own? It’s sort of distracting while reading a page when the top is switching.
Kay
MA: Children are adorable and every moment matters, especially kindergarten.
Strength: Great choice of music. I like how you didn’t pick some fufu music instead you chose rock.
Improve: On some of the video in the beginning, there’s the address and phone number for the elementary school. Since it’s on YouTube, maybe edit it those out for safety reasons.
MA: Children are adorable and every moment matters, especially kindergarten.
Strength: Great choice of music. I like how you didn’t pick some fufu music instead you chose rock.
Improve: On some of the video in the beginning, there’s the address and phone number for the elementary school. Since it’s on YouTube, maybe edit it those out for safety reasons.
Kyle
MA: A resume where employers can see your skills and contact you.
Strength: Great layout. It’s apparent that you worked hard on the design. It looks very professional.
Improve: There is a useful link box on your homepage and some of the links look professional, however you have NHL and deviant art, which doesn’t really seem to fit with a resume web site.
MA: A resume where employers can see your skills and contact you.
Strength: Great layout. It’s apparent that you worked hard on the design. It looks very professional.
Improve: There is a useful link box on your homepage and some of the links look professional, however you have NHL and deviant art, which doesn’t really seem to fit with a resume web site.
Jifu
MA: His clan kicks butt in the video game world.
Strength: Great choice of music and also screen shots. The music goes along great with the action.
Improve: Cut out some of the couple scenes in the beginning where it’s you and your clan running around. It’s a little dull. Don’t forget to site music.
MA: His clan kicks butt in the video game world.
Strength: Great choice of music and also screen shots. The music goes along great with the action.
Improve: Cut out some of the couple scenes in the beginning where it’s you and your clan running around. It’s a little dull. Don’t forget to site music.
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